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      1 year ago

      That sentence starting with “While” is not a complete sentence, and Tom is very precise with his language and is a huge nerd about grammar. There are also a few other questionable grammar choices like the comma after “though” and the comma after “thanks and regards” instead of an independent clause delimiter like “!” Or “.”. I don’t think it was Tom for that reason.